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Saturday Is A Time To Party...Part 2!

I had just left Amys and decided to go visit Tails.

I was pretty cautious seen as I had just narrowly escape from Eggmans lair!

But I managed to get to Tails' in one piece!

On my arrival I found Tails working his new 'healing machine' and as I called his named he jumped out of his skin banging his head on the side!

I laughed as he jumped up rubbing his head and went and help myself to an Apple.

"Hey Sonic, how are ya?" He asked me, taking off his goggles and putting his trusty screwdriver down.

"Im fine, Thanks for coming to the rescue before!" I muffled through mouthfulls of Apple.

"I was just thinking about that actually...How did you get captured by Eggman? and what did he do to you?" He said looking slightly concerned.

"Oh you know...I was just running around and I saw the robot coming and was just about to start the fun when it shot a huge net at me, obviously it captured me and then sent another net flying at me" I took another bite of my Apple, "Then it carried me of to Eggman's base, threw me in a cell where it took the net from me, and locked me in...then..."

I had to think about this part, because at that moment I had totally forgotten that I was injected with something.

"Ohh I remember standing up then noticing something small coming from the wall, it injected me with something and I collapsed in the cell, untill this morning"

"And you have no idea what it was he injected you with?"

I shook my head swallowing the last of my Apple, then I threw the core in the bin.

"I don't think it was anything bad though, I think it was just a tranquiliser so I would fall asleep without fighting!" I said casually.

To be honest though I was slightly concerned with what I was pumped with but I was positive it would be nothing bad!

After my long talk with Tails I noticed it was nearing 8 o'clock!

"Woo sorry buddy I got to go" I said and turned on my heels running out of the door!

Come on come on, Im going to be late!

I stopped an inch from her door just as the clock struck 8

Phew, made it!

Clenching my hand I rapped on the door 3 times, and boy! Did I get a suprise!

Amy opened the door revealing herself, she was wearing a dress that was cut from her knees.

It was longer than her normal red dress and it was pure, brilliant white!
Her quills were down naturally like always and there was a white headband resting on her head.

She looked like an Angel!

"Wow Amy you look amazing!" I said, I hadnt even dressed up or anything, I couldnt stand clothes there was just no point in them!

"Thank you Sonikku" She blushed bright crimson smiling at me.

She stepped out of her door and closed it behind her, then she asked me where we were going...

"Ermm"

Shoot, where are we going? I hadnt thought about that!

I quickly thought up a plan before she caught on and told her it would be a suprise.

I scouped her up in my arms and her arms easily found there way around my neck as always, then my feet worked up and started running.

5 seconds later I stopped, we werent at any old fancy restuarant, or at the beach!

I just simply took her to the park! But I did take her to a secret part where not many people went!

I put her down and she looked at me puzzled.

"Be right back"

And once again I sped off but I was back in 2.5 seconds carrying a blanket, some candles and a wicker basket full to the brim with food!

I set it all down before she could even blink and she gasped, just from that one little gasp I knew Id done well!

I had laid the blanket down and set loads of different candles around each giving off a dim glow, then I set out one plate of food.

It was spagetti bollonese (Which I had just got from the restuarant in town)

"Oh Sonikku this is amazing!" She giggled looking around, her eyes wide with excitement.

Once again I picked her up and sat her down on the blanket then parked myself next to her.

"Hope you like spagetti!" I winked at her.

"I do, very much"

So we both tucked in, dont worry I didnt just get a normal plate size for us to share, it was a big one set for 2 people.

I specially got it because if I was lucky we would both get the same piece and well...

We were getting to the end when we actually did get the both piece of spagetti!

She looked at me then looked away quickly blushing like crazy, how cute!

So I carried on eating my way up the string of spagetti and she eventually did and finally we met!

But just as our lips touched, I doubled over in pain, letting out a large shout!

"Sonic whats wrong" Amy shouted in horror her hands on my back!

I cant explain it but I got a pain which started in my stomach and ran up and down my torso, it was excruciating!

It lasted about 5 seconds and strangely enough it was gone!

"Im ok Amy, dont worry I just had a sharp pain come out of no-where, Im feeling better now"

She didnt look convinced but started eating again watching me closely!

We both finished the food and I was still thinking about what just happened.

What the hell was that? Where did it come from? Aww I was so close to getting another kiss too!

I put the plate away and sat closer to Amy, from where we were sat there was a perfect view of the city, you could see all the lights shining and it look great at night!

Without notice Amy sat even closer to me and rested her head on my chest.
She fit perfectly and I put my arm around her waist to hold her, everything felt so right!

We sat there for about 2 hours with me just holding her, every noe and then she would breathe in deeply and exhale on my chest, it felt so relaxing I could of sayed there forever but it was getting pretty late so I said we should get off home!

I moved away everything within a blink of the eye, then picked Amy up again and ran back to her house.

She felt so warm against me and felt it disapear as I put her back down on her downstep!

"Thank you for tonight Sonic, it was amazing!"

"Well thank you for giving me a second chance"

She was looking straight into my eyes smiling at me naturally, I moved in close to her and held her to my chest staring straight back at her. She started moving towards me so I copied her closing my eyes as we connected, the kiss was just as good as the last one! even better, if thats possible!

But it happened again 10 seconds in, I felt the same pain only 2 times worse.

I pulled from Amy sharply then fell on my knees, she was screaming my name but I wasnt paying any attention, something else was happening besides the pain.

It was the strangest sensation...First I went light-headed then I felt like I was watching from a distance, but still in my head.

The pain continued but I was more like a spectator now as my body stood up and ran away from Amy!

I had no idea what was happening, no idea where I was going, and no idea how it happened.

I, well not me but still me if you get me! was heading towards the city, I had no idea why but as soon as I got there I knew.

The thing controlling me smashed threw windows and threw cars into buildings, I could see and hear people screaming and running away but I couldnt stop my body!

'I' carried on smashing things when 10 minutes later I could hear the engine of the X-Tornado flying towards me.

I couldnt wave or call for help, but my body turned and watch the plane gliding towards 'us'.

Immediatly my body sprung into action and tried destroying the plane, all I could do was watch hoping, no wait, praying that Tails would be able to capture me and help me!

But as it turns out Tails was only being a decoy as behind me Knuckles was ready to pounce! As he did 'I' turned around dodged him punching him out of 'my' way!

He didnt get back up and thats when I got really scared.

What if I never get to control my own body again? If it knocked Knuckles down so easily how is Tails going to stop it?

Alsorts of things were running through my head by now and I could only watch in horror as 'I' scaled he side of a building a leaped off in an attempt to get the X-Tornado.

I saw Tails swerve out of 'my' way, and I cheered in my head, it was all down to Tails now to help me!

As 'I' landed back on the ground, which was pretty roughly, I saw Tails fly low to the ground heading towards me.

He go closer and closer each milisecond, i had no idea what he was doing, then a compartment flew open and all of a sudden 'I' was trapped inside the plane, but in a part that I had never seen before.

My body threw itself against the sides but it didnt even make a scratch!

I had to endure this for 10 whole minutes, the whole of this time I was still experiencing the pain in my torso, but I had grown use to it so it didnt bother me as much.

I couldnt tell if we were still flying or not because 'I' was still getting thrown around trying to escape, thats when the hatch opened and 'I' ran into a cage!

Great another cage, come on Tails help me fast I pleaded watching him watch me through the bars!

I watched as he pressed loads of buttons and 6 machanical arms came through the bars and restrained my body!

"Sonic if you can hear me, dont worry Ill save you" Tails said trying to look into my eyes, which was quite hard seen as my body was trying to pull itself from the arm's grasp

Tails came towards me with a needle

Oh great another needle, how peachy

He stuck it under my elbow joint and took a sample of blood, I didnt even feel a thing, but well when your in as much pain as I was you cant really notice the little things.

"Ill be back in 15 minutes Sonic, hang in there"

I wish I could shout back to him and tell him to hurry, well just tell him anything but I couldnt do a thing now my body had been taken over.

I waited 10 minutes when Tails came running back into the room, he was smiling thats how I knew I was saved!

"Eggman didnt just inject you with a simple tranquiliser, he put tiny nano-bots in to. Theve taken over your body and stopped you from doing anything, so I know you can hear me!"

He ran over to his other station as I thought about what he said, it all seemed right!

Eggman was pretty clever to come up with something like this, good job Tails is even smarter!

I tried to watch as Tails mixed up a thin solution and sucked it up into a new needle!

"All I need to do is pump you with this, its just a simple formular that will destroy any nano-bots, it wont harm you in any way Sonic!"

It took him a good 5 minutes to inject me because the nano-bots inside were having none of it!

But he eventually got it in and instantly I felt the pain in my torso fade and everything became clearer, I still couldnt handle my body but I was getting there, it didnt help with the arms holding me in place.

I tried to talk and managed to say 'Tails' before I went silent again, Tails smiled and ran back to his desk of buttons summoning the arms away from me.

But I still didnt have full control of my body and I jerked around for abit before I finally lay there on the ground not moving.

Slowly I got onto my knees and looked at Tails.

"Thanks buddy, you did amazing, I had no idea what was going on!"

Tails lifted the cage from me and ran over, helping me up.

"That was some Stunt Eggman pulled" He said helping me walk over to the couch.

As I was walking I could feel aches and pains kick in and they remained there even when I slumpted down on the sofa!

"I know but you saved me, thanks lil bro!" I was so tired by now, it must be pretty late, I could feel my eyelids drooping!

"Do you mind if I got some sleep and we talk about this tomorrow?" I mumbled laying my head down, it was so comforting just resting my head on a pillow.

He nodded and left the room, but I noticed he locked it, I didnt think anything of it, he was proberbly worried that all the nano-bots hadnt been destroyed.

I closed my eyes and straight away fell into a deep slumber.

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Heres chapter 8
part 2 of saturday

hope you enjoy this took me nearly two hours to write because...
1. my keyboard is crap lol
2. My imagination just went from me!!!

Theres only one more chapter to go ooooooo

Enjoy


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Mood: Joy ~spd243 Jun 18, 2008  Student Artist
Awesome story! :) Keep making more!!

Do you know how to put words in itallics? I'm writing a Sonic story myself.
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:iconxxsonicsgirlxx:
thanks and dont worry...i got tons of stories im writing =D

ermm yea to do italics you put <.i.> (But without the dots...just did that so you could see other wise it would be in italic right now lol)
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~spd243 Jun 18, 2008  Student Artist
Thanks! :)
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~Magic804 Apr 22, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
OMG This was so Accelerating!! Love it (sorry for the late comment too much school work
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:iconxxsonicsgirlxx:
hehe i dont mind but thanks =D

well now ive started the new one ill try and make it better than this one :highfive: lol
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~Magic804 Apr 23, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
ok!
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:iconrachlovedraw:
wow evil sonic!!!! cool i wonder why tail locked the door??? and noo one more chapter this story is really good! after this story will you be making anouther one i love yor storys^^
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:iconxxsonicsgirlxx:
i know hehe i thought it would be cool with him evil =D
and Tails just locked the door incase the nano-bots all hadnt been destroyed just for a precaution

and I would carry this on but its only a week long but yeaa I will deffinatly be writing zanother love story I just need some ideas for one but im sure it wont take long lol =D
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:iconrachlovedraw:
okii yey i carnt wait!!!^^
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!katepl Apr 15, 2008  Student
aww awesome part ^^ And Sonic didn't kiss Amy T_T
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